If you could live perfectly well without sleeping, if you had no need to sleep at all, how would you

2014-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Since I was enrolled in the master of theology programme, I had ever written my master's thesis for the last qualification of my graduation. At that time, even though I needed lots of time for preparing to write it, the time for my dissertation was only limited to nights. Therefore, I mainly wrote my thesis in nights. Writing thesis in nights was exceptionally exciting to me, since I could feel extremely fresh and awake in nights. In addition, I really love to research and study about theology, especially biblical theology. Thus if I could live perfectly well without sleeping, I would spend all my night to enjoy wonderful pleasure to study the bible academically.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thanks for answering the question. ^^ I hope I got all your ideas correctly. Please go over the corrections. Anyway, you can have longer time to enjoy reading your bible tomorrow since it\'s a holiday. Enjoy! ~T. Jessie~ Since I was enrolled in the master of theology programme, I had ever written my master\'s thesis for the last qualification of my graduation. >> Since I was enrolled in the master of theology programme, I had written my master\'s thesis for the last qualification of my graduation. At that time, even though I needed lots of time for preparing to write it, the time for my dissertation was only limited to nights. >> At that time, even though I needed lots of time for writing it, the time for my dissertation was only limited to nights. Therefore, I mainly wrote my thesis in nights. >> Therefore, I mainly wrote my thesis at nights. Writing thesis in nights was exceptionally exciting to me, since I could feel extremely fresh and awake in nights. >> Writing thesis at nights was exceptionally exciting for me, since I could feel extremely fresh and awake at nights. In addition, I really love to research and study about theology, especially biblical theology. >> Correct! Thus if I could live perfectly well without sleeping, I would spend all my night to enjoy wonderful pleasure to study the bible academically. >> Thus if I could live perfectly well without sleeping, I would spend all my nights enjoying a wonderful and pleasurable time studying the bible academically.

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