If you could live perfectly well without sleeping, if you had no need to sleep at all, how would you
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Since I was enrolled in the master of theology programme, I had ever written my master's thesis for the last qualification of my graduation. At that time, even though I needed lots of time for preparing to write it, the time for my dissertation was only limited to nights. Therefore, I mainly wrote my thesis in nights. Writing thesis in nights was exceptionally exciting to me, since I could feel extremely fresh and awake in nights. In addition, I really love to research and study about theology, especially biblical theology. Thus if I could live perfectly well without sleeping, I would spend all my night to enjoy wonderful pleasure to study the bible academically.
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Hi there!
Thanks for answering the question. ^^
I hope I got all your ideas correctly.
Please go over the corrections.
Anyway, you can have longer time to enjoy reading your bible tomorrow since it\'s a holiday.
Enjoy!
~T. Jessie~
Since I was enrolled in the master of theology programme, I had ever written my master\'s thesis for the last qualification of my graduation.
>> Since I was enrolled in the master of theology programme, I had written my master\'s thesis for the last qualification of my graduation.
At that time, even though I needed lots of time for preparing to write it, the time for my dissertation was only limited to nights.
>> At that time, even though I needed lots of time for writing it, the time for my dissertation was only limited to nights.
Therefore, I mainly wrote my thesis in nights.
>> Therefore, I mainly wrote my thesis at nights.
Writing thesis in nights was exceptionally exciting to me, since I could feel extremely fresh and awake in nights.
>> Writing thesis at nights was exceptionally exciting for me, since I could feel extremely fresh and awake at nights.
In addition, I really love to research and study about theology, especially biblical theology.
>> Correct!
Thus if I could live perfectly well without sleeping, I would spend all my night to enjoy wonderful pleasure to study the bible academically.
>> Thus if I could live perfectly well without sleeping, I would spend all my nights enjoying a wonderful and pleasurable time studying the bible academically.
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