If you could live someone else’s life, whose would it be and why?

2016-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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When I was asked the question of whose life you want to live if you could, the following answer popup up in my head. I wish I could live life of a famous celebrity, a great politician like Obama, a CEO of a big conglomerate, or a well-known professor. Giving a second thought, I doubt if their lives are really what I want. Why do I envy their lives? Thinking over the question, I might not want to live like them. It would be tiring and stressful. I won’t be happy if I live like them. Their lives are simply too much, way beyond the level I can manage. From practical point of view, I want a little bit more than I have now. I want to raise my living standard a bit more, but not too high, financially, socially, and spiritually.I wish I could earn a little bit more, have some more assets, a bit higher social position, and have more generous personality. Then, the following question pops up in my mind. Are they just wishes? Are they something that I cannot achieve? I can do it even right now.

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Good afternoon and happy Friday, Sir [이름]! ^^ Thank you so much for your time. You are right, i also thought about the life of the famous people. I someitmes wonder what do they do when they are just alone or in front of the camera. I am sure that you will be able to reach yout goals and dreams. Think positive. ^^ Have a great day and see you in class. Teacher Nina   When I was asked the question of whose life you want to live if you could, the following answer popup up in my head. >> When I was asked the question of whose life you want to live if you could, the following answer popped up in my head. I wish I could live life of a famous celebrity, a great politician like Obama, a CEO of a big conglomerate, or a well-known professor. >> I wish I could live the life of a famous celebrity, a great politician like Obama, a CEO of a big conglomerate, or a well-known professor. Giving a second thought, I doubt if their lives are really what I want. >> correct Why do I envy their lives? >> correct Thinking over the question, I might not want to live like them. >> correct It would be tiring and stressful. >> correct I won’t be happy if I live like them. >> correct Their lives are simply too much, way beyond the level I can manage. >> correct From practical point of view, I want a little bit more than I have now. >> correct I want to raise my living standard a bit more, but not too high, financially, socially, and spiritually. >> correct I wish I could earn a little bit more, have some more assets, a bit higher social position, and have more generous personality. >> correct Then, the following question pops up in my mind. >> correct Are they just wishes? >> correct Are they something that I cannot achieve? >> correct I can do it even right now. >> correct

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