If you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make

When I was a high school student, I　didn’t like school’s strict rules. Some ones were very ridiculous. So if I can go back to that time, I will make them more relax. I will change the rule of student’s appearance. Those about the length of hair, color of bags, shoes, socks, hairpin, etc do not help improve students’ grades. It is rather disrupting, making them more stressful. Too rigid rules have students get rebellious sprit. Thinking back to the day, trying to find the bag and shoes for fitting the school law was useless and time-consuming. The school bag should be all black and the shoes all white. The brand logos were also not allowed. It was very funny. Finding them was more difficult. So if I go back to the day, I want more free school life and it will make more excited memory.

Hi [이름]! ^^ Woah, your high school life was severe. I mean, where would you find a bag, nowadays, that don\'t have logos and all.  Good job in expressing your opinion. I actually look forward to reading your essays. ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   When I was a high school student, I　didn’t like school’s strict rules. >> When I was in high school, I didn\'t like the school\'s strict rules.   Some ones were very ridiculous. So if I can go back to that time, I will make them more relax.>> Some rules were very ridiculous. So if I could go back to that time, I would make the rules more lax. I will change the rule of student’s appearance. >> I would change the rule about the student\'s dress code.   Those about the length of hair, color of bags, shoes, socks, hairpin, etc do not help improve students’ grades. >> CORRECT   It is rather disrupting, making them more stressful. Too rigid rules have students get rebellious sprit. >> It is rather disrupting and making the students feel more stressed. Rules that are too rigid make students rebellious.   Thinking back to the day, trying to find the bag and shoes for fitting the school law was useless and time-consuming. >> Thinking back to that day, trying to find the appropriate bag and shoes was useless and time-consuming.    The school bag should be all black and the shoes all white. The brand logos were also not allowed. It was very funny. >> CORRECT   Finding them was more difficult. So if I go back to the day, I want more free school life and it will make more excited memory. >> Looking for them was even more difficult so if I were to go back to that time, I would have wanted a freer school life that had more exciting memories.