If you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make?

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When I went to school, I was not well aware of the importance of promotion for products and public relations to let the public know your existence and what you are doing.

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Depending on how well you do PR, your activities and performance could be evaluated differently by the public.

>> Depending on how well you do at PR, your activities and performance could be evaluated differently by the public.

Even a catastrophic incident or an error made by a company, which caused tens or hundreds of people’s lives and triggered people’s outrage could be well managed to minimize the negative impact if the company quickly and properly responds to the media.

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Some companies have gone bankrupt because of the improper handling of such cases.

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In a modern society, it doesn’t matter what your intent is and how good you are at something.

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You have to promote and let others know about you.

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The same theory applies to schools.

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I think that the university I attended was not good at PR.

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Although there were a lot of resources and environment was already there, my school did not fully utilize or co-op with local communities.

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