If you could meet any famous person, dead or alive, who would it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to meet Son, soccer starplayer. In detail, I want to meet Son in Tottenham Hostpur Stadium,U.K and I play with him just 10 minutes. Because he is motivation of my life. I know He put in the effort to play soccer well. I respect him and I am always supporting for him.
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Hi [이름]! I wish you could meet him too someday. It might be one of the best matches ever hahaha! Anyways, thank you for sharing.
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I want to meet Son, soccer starplayer.
>> I want to meet Son, the soccer star player.
In detail, I want to meet Son in Tottenham Hostpur Stadium,U.K and I play with him just 10 minutes.
>>In detail, I want to meet him in Tottenham Hotspur Stadium, U.K and play with him even just for 10 minutes.
Because he is motivation of my life.
>> He is one of my motivations in life.
I know He put in the effort to play soccer well.
>> I know he puts a lot of effort in playing soccer.
I respect him and I am always supporting for him.
>> I respect him and I always support him.
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