If you could meet any famous person, who would it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could meet any famous person, it would be the members of SEVENTEEN.
Their amazing music always lifts my spirits and makes time fly by quickly. And the friendship they show each other gives me faith that it\'s important to like the right people. While I do admire their looks and vocal talent, what I love most about them is their character and mindset. Their genuine personalities and how they support each other make them even more admirable to me.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름][이름]! Are you a big SEVENTEEN fan? That\'s awesome! SEVENTEEN is such a talented group with amazing performances and music. Do you have a favorite member or a favorite song of theirs? Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
If I could meet any famous person, it would be the members of SEVENTEEN.>>Correct!
Their amazing music always lifts my spirits and makes time fly by quickly.
Their amazing music always lifts my spirits and makes time fly by quickly.
>>Their amazing music always lifts my spirits and makes time fly by.
And the friendship they show each other gives me faith that it\'s important to like the right people.
>>The bond they share reminds me that it\'s essential to surround yourself with the right people.
While I do admire their looks and vocal talent, what I love most about them is their character and mindset.
>>Correct!
Their genuine personalities and how they support each other make them even more admirable to me.
>>Their authentic personalities and the way they support each other make them even more admirable to me.
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