If you could name your own star, what would you name it and why?
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Hi [이름]!
I got very inspired with your answer.
The Philosophy behind it is quite meaningful.
I will try to remember your advice whenever I look up at the night sky. ^^
~~t. Ally
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If I could name my own star, I would name it as ‘not adequate but best’.
>> CORRECT!
People say that life is C(Choice) between B(Birth) and D(Death).
>> People say that life is a C(Choice) between B(Birth) and D(Death).
I’d like to advise someone who stares at my star to choose the best if they won’t regret afterward.
>> I’d like to advise someone who stares at my star to choose the best so that they won’t regret anything afterwards.
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