If you could observe an extinct animal for an afternoon, which one would you choose and why?

2020-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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I think that elephant is one of would-be extinct animals in the world because of loss of habitat, lack of prey, conflicts with humans. Unless improving of all things, it will be faced on the edge of extinction. It should be controlled by government and nobody can not disturb this great plan for next generation. We can see real elephants anywhere we want but inside the pages of books or in pictures. That\'s why it is world wide concern to solve.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Ethan!

Thank you for submitting your answer.

I heard about the problems elephants are facing these days. I hope that people would think of them as well and not just them, even other living creatures on earth. That way, they will continue to exist for the next generations to see. ^^

~Teacher Gina

I think that elephant is one of would-be extinct animals in the world because of loss of habitat, lack of prey, conflicts with humans.

>> I think that the elephant is one of the would-be extinct animals in the world because of loss of habitat, lack of prey and conflicts with humans.
Unless improving of all things, it will be faced on the edge of extinction.

>> Unless we improve all things, it will be faced on the edge of extinction.
It should be controlled by government and nobody can not disturb this great plan for next generation.

>> It should be controlled by the government and nobody can not disturb this great plan for the next generation.
We can see real elephants anywhere we want but inside the pages of books or in pictures.

>> We can see real elephants anywhere we want and not just inside the pages of books or in pictures.
That\'s why it is world wide concern to solve.

>> That\'s why it is a worldwide concern to solve.

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