If you could only eat one food for the rest of your life, what would it be? Describe it and explain

2015-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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If I could only eat one food for the rest of my life, I will choose noodle. Because I like eating noodle. There have many kinds of noodles in Korea. So, I can get noodle easily and buy it conveniently nearby my house. In addition, it is High-calorie food contains much carbohydrate. Although eating too much High-calorie food can leads to obesity, but it can provide enough energy needed for your body if you intake it properly.

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An awesome Friday to you, [이름]! How are you? I hope that you are having a great day today. Anyway, thank you for answering your homework. I am pleased that you are always doing your best to study English despite of your busy schedule. You did a good job and keep it up!! I think your answer is very interesting and wise. I agree that noodles are very convenient to eat and they are delicious too. I hope to share a meal with you soon! See you later! :)   Teacher Carmen   If I could only eat one food for the rest of my life, I will choose noodle. >> If I could only eat one food for the rest of my life, I will choose a noodle. Because I like eating noodle. >> It is because I like eating noodles.   There have many kinds of noodles in Korea. >> There are many kinds of noodles in Korea.   So, I can get noodle easily and buy it conveniently nearby my house.>> I can get a noodle easily and buy it conviently in a store nearby my house.   In addition, it is High-calorie food contains much carbohydrate. >> In addition, it is a food that has high calories and it contains a lot of carbohydrates.   Although eating too much High-calorie food can leads to obesity, but it can provide enough energy needed for your body if you intake it properly. >>Even though eating food that has high calories can lead to obesity, it can still provide enough energy needed by your body only if you take it in a right amount.

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