If you could only eat one food for the rest of your life, what would it be? Describe it and explain
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If I could only eat one food for the rest of my life, I will choose noodle.
Because I like eating noodle. There have many kinds of noodles in Korea. So, I can get noodle easily and buy it conveniently nearby my house.
In addition, it is High-calorie food contains much carbohydrate. Although eating too much High-calorie food can leads to obesity, but it can provide enough energy needed for your body if you intake it properly.
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An awesome Friday to you, [이름]!
How are you? I hope that you are having a great day today.
Anyway, thank you for answering your homework. I am pleased that you are always doing your best to study English despite of your busy schedule.
You did a good job and keep it up!! I think your answer is very interesting and wise.
I agree that noodles are very convenient to eat and they are delicious too. I hope to share a meal with you soon! See you later! :)
Teacher Carmen
If I could only eat one food for the rest of my life, I will choose noodle.
>> If I could only eat one food for the rest of my life, I will choose a noodle.
Because I like eating noodle.
>> It is because I like eating noodles.
There have many kinds of noodles in Korea.
>> There are many kinds of noodles in Korea.
So, I can get noodle easily and buy it conveniently nearby my house.>> I can get a noodle easily and buy it conviently in a store nearby my house.
In addition, it is High-calorie food contains much carbohydrate.
>> In addition, it is a food that has high calories and it contains a lot of carbohydrates.
Although eating too much High-calorie food can leads to obesity, but it can provide enough energy needed for your body if you intake it properly.
>>Even though eating food that has high calories can lead to obesity, it can still provide enough energy needed by your body only if you take it in a right amount.
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