If you could only eat one food for the rest of your life, what would it be? Describe it and explain

2015-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I actually like sweet foods and fruits. I especially like wheat based foods such as bread, cakes, snacks, and chocolates. However, I have the indigestion problem, so eating such wheat based foods can aggravate the symptom. I always have a hard time refraining myself from indulging in those foods. It is indeed difficult to resist the temptation. Fried foods such as fried chickens, donuts, and pork cutlets are also so delicious, but they lead to the increase of your cholesterol level. Almost all of the sugary or sweet fools are not good for your health. If I have to choose only one food for the rest of my life, it would be rice, although I don’t like eating it that much. The reason is because my stomach has accustomed to digesting rice well. After eating rice, I feel comfortable, but I feel bloated when I eat other fried or wheat based foods. I can choose one food that I like regardless of my digestion problem, it would be bread or banana. They are sweet and tasty.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]!

Happy Friday. ^^

Thank you so much for your composition.

I am so happy that you like sweet foods and fruits.

I hope that we could eat some cakes and ice cream with your family someday.

See you in class.

Teacher Nina


I actually like sweet foods and fruits.

>> correct

I especially like wheat based foods such as bread, cakes, snacks, and chocolates.

>> correct

However, I have the indigestion problem, so eating such wheat based foods can aggravate the symptom.

>> However, I have an indigestion problem, so eating such wheat based foods can aggravate the symptom.

I always have a hard time refraining myself from indulging in those foods.

>> correct

It is indeed difficult to resist the temptation.

>> correct

Fried foods such as fried chickens, donuts, and pork cutlets are also so delicious, but they lead to the increase of your cholesterol level.

>> correct

Almost all of the sugary or sweet fools are not good for your health.

>> Almost all of the sugary or sweet foods are not good for your health.

If I have to choose only one food for the rest of my life, it would be rice, although I don’t like eating it that much.

>> correct

The reason is because my stomach has accustomed to digesting rice well.

>> correct

After eating rice, I feel comfortable, but I feel bloated when I eat other fried or wheat based foods.

>> correct

I can choose one food that I like regardless of my digestion problem, it would be bread or banana.

>> correct

They are sweet and tasty.

>> correct

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