If you could only eat one food for the rest of your life, what would it be? Describe it and explain
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Hello Sir [이름]!
Happy Friday. ^^
Thank you so much for your composition.
I am so happy that you like sweet foods and fruits.
I hope that we could eat some cakes and ice cream with your family someday.
See you in class.
Teacher Nina
I actually like sweet foods and fruits.
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I especially like wheat based foods such as bread, cakes, snacks, and chocolates.
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However, I have the indigestion problem, so eating such wheat based foods can aggravate the symptom.
>> However, I have an indigestion problem, so eating such wheat based foods can aggravate the symptom.
I always have a hard time refraining myself from indulging in those foods.
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It is indeed difficult to resist the temptation.
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Fried foods such as fried chickens, donuts, and pork cutlets are also so delicious, but they lead to the increase of your cholesterol level.
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Almost all of the sugary or sweet fools are not good for your health.
>> Almost all of the sugary or sweet foods are not good for your health.
If I have to choose only one food for the rest of my life, it would be rice, although I don’t like eating it that much.
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The reason is because my stomach has accustomed to digesting rice well.
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After eating rice, I feel comfortable, but I feel bloated when I eat other fried or wheat based foods.
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I can choose one food that I like regardless of my digestion problem, it would be bread or banana.
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They are sweet and tasty.
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