If you could only pack five things for a trip to an unknown place, what would you take?

2014-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I ever didn't think that. first of all, I'm going to go there with my boyfriend. cause if I go alone, so I feel lonely. and I'll bring books and laptop. that's it. I don't think anymore.

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Hello there, [이름]!! ^_^ Thank you so much for doing your homework!! Oh my God!! I missed you a lot!! Let\'s just continue our discussion tomorrow, then. By the way, you did great today!! Just keep on practicing, okay? Don\'t worry I\'m always here to help you out! Have a wonderful night! See you! ~~T.May   Here are your corrections:   I ever didn\'t think that. >> I didn\'t ever think of that.first of all, I\'m going to go there with my boyfriend. >> First of all, I\'m going with my boyfriend.cause if I go alone, so I feel lonely. >> correct!and I\'ll bring books and laptop. that\'s it. >> correct!I don\'t think anymore. >> I can\'t think anymore.

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