If you could only pack five things for a trip to an unknown place, what would you take?
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I ever didn't think that.
first of all, I'm going to go there with my boyfriend.
cause if I go alone, so I feel lonely.
and I'll bring books and laptop. that's it.
I don't think anymore.
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Here are your corrections:
I ever didn\'t think that.
>> I didn\'t ever think of that.first of all, I\'m going to go there with my boyfriend.
>> First of all, I\'m going with my boyfriend.cause if I go alone, so I feel lonely.
>> correct!and I\'ll bring books and laptop. that\'s it.
>> correct!I don\'t think anymore.
>> I can\'t think anymore.
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