If you could only pack five things for a trip to an unknown place, what would you take?

2015-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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If I would go on a trip to an uninhibited place, although I actually don’t want to, and be allowed to pack only a limited number of things, I would take matches(a lighter), water, chocolate, compass, and a ground marker. So, I can survive even in the worst case situation. When I travel to an unknown place where basic necessities for living are available, I would rather take things that can make my stay much easier and more comfortable such as clothes, some medicines, a guidebook, a multi-adapter, and an I-pad that cannot be purchased locally. I used to take along hair gel, lotion, etc., but most hotels provide free amenity so that I don’t need to do that these days. If we have an enough budget for the travel, there would not be many things we should worry about, however, we all are always pressed for the constrained budget. In order to be a smart traveler, we have to lighten our bag. The method is that we should be aggressive in giving up packing things that are not necessary.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름] ^^

Great tips!
I would keep that in mind. Hihihihi.

I hope that you are having a good day.

Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina


If I would go on a trip to an uninhibited place, although I actually don’t want to, and be allowed to pack only a limited number of things, I would take matches(a lighter), water, chocolate, compass, and a ground marker.

>> correct

So, I can survive even in the worst case situation. 

>> correct

When I travel to an unknown place where basic necessities for living are available, I would rather take things that can make my stay much easier and more comfortable such as clothes, some medicines, a guidebook, a multi-adapter, and an I-pad that cannot be purchased locally. 

>> correct

I used to take along hair gel, lotion, etc., but most hotels provide free amenity so that I don’t need to do that these days.

>> correct

If we have an enough budget for the travel, there would not be many things we should worry about, however, we all are always pressed for the constrained budget.

>> correct

>> OR: If we have an enough budget for the travel, there would not be many things we should worry about. However, we all are always pressed for the constrained budget.

In order to be a smart traveler, we have to lighten our bag.

>> correct

The method is that we should be aggressive in giving up packing things that are not necessary.

>> correct

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