If you could only pack five things for a trip to an unknown place, what would you take?
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It will depend on which region you travel to. If you travel to a tropical area, you don’t need to take warm clothes. If I don’t have any information about the place to visit at all, I would put focus on basic necessities. Without any clue about where to go, I have to prepare for the worst case scenario because I might face various difficult situations that I had not expected at all. So, I will take clothes, tooth paste and brush, first aid kits with some over-the-counter medicine, emergency survival foods, and water. If I have to travel to an uninhabited island, my backpack will be filled with survival kits such as match, compass, knife, sleeping bag, food and water. Traveling to an unknown place sounds exciting as long as it is safe. We are so used to living in the city, so it is better to experience new things in somewhat a remote place where nature is well preserved and local people live differently from the people in big cities. However, on earth, do we have unknown places?
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Good afternoon Sir [이름]! Yehey! It\'s the mid-week again!
I am so happy that we only have two more days before the weekend.
You are right! We should experience new things.I guess there are unknown places that people should discover.
Kindly check the url below:
http://www.lifebuzz.com/unknown-places/
I hope your family could visit those places. See you in class.
Teacher Nina
It will depend on which region you travel to.
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>> OR: It will depend on which region you will be going.
If you travel to a tropical area, you don’t need to take warm clothes.
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>> OR: If you travel to a tropical area, you don’t need to take clothes that will make you feel warm.
If I don’t have any information about the place to visit at all, I would put focus on basic necessities.
>> Better: If I don’t have any information at all about the place to visit, I would put focus on the basic necessities.
Without any clue about where to go, I have to prepare for the worst case scenario because I might face various difficult situations that I had not expected at all.
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So, I will take clothes, tooth paste and brush, first aid kits with some over-the-counter medicine, emergency survival foods, and water.
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If I have to travel to an uninhabited island, my backpack will be filled with survival kits such as match, compass, knife, sleeping bag, food and water.
>> correct
Traveling to an unknown place sounds exciting as long as it is safe.
>> correct
We are so used to living in the city, so it is better to experience new things in somewhat a remote place where nature is well preserved and local people live differently from the people in big cities.
>> correct
However, on earth, do we have unknown places?
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