If you could open your own restaurant, what kind of food would serve and why?
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1,want to serve korean food.
2, Because I am korean,so I’m confident in korean favors and plating.
3, For appetizers and desserts, I want to serve
fusion dishes that appropriately mix western and other estern cuisines.
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If you could open your own restaurant, what kind of food would you serve and why?
1,want to serve korean food.
>>> I want to serve Korean food.
2, Because I am korean,so I’m confident in korean favors and plating.
>>> As a Korean, I’m confident in my ability to highlight authentic Korean flavors and plating.
3, For appetizers and desserts, I want to serve
fusion dishes that appropriately mix western and other estern cuisines.
>>> For appetizers and desserts, I plan to offer fusion dishes that thoughtfully blend Western and other Eastern cuisines.
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