If you could receive one thing in the whole world as a present right now, what would it be?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want top receive a brand new keyboard and a keyboard resin mold set! If I receive it, I will make my own keyboard for me! Because sometimes I usually watch keyboard DIY. Because its soooooo pretty. 😍😍😍
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I want top receive a brand new keyboard and a keyboard resin mold set!
>>> I want to receive a brand new keyboard and a keyboard resin mold set!
If I receive it, I will make my own keyboard for me!
>>> CORRECT!
Because sometimes I usually watch keyboard DIY.
>>> Because I usually watch keyboard DIY videos.
Because its soooooo pretty.
>>> And it\'s so pretty.
OR>>> It\'s beautiful.
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