If you could register for a course or lesson, what would it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to register for a baking lesson or cooking lesson.
Because bakig or cooking is what I\'m interested in these days.
I think it will be fun because I can learn professionally and make various breads and foods and I think I can increase my professionalism.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
Thank you for sharing your answer.
Oh, a cooking or baking lesson would be so awesome.
I hope that you will be able to try it soon. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
I would like to register for a baking lesson or cooking lesson.
>> CORRECT.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I’d like to sign up for a baking or cooking class.
Because bakig or cooking is what I\'m interested in these days.
>> Because baking or cooking is what I’m interested in these days.
I think it will be fun because I can learn professionally and make various breads and foods and I think I can increase my professionalism.
>> I think it will be fun because I can learn professionally, make various breads and dishes, and improve my skills.
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