If you could relive one moment in your life, what would it be?
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If I could relive one moment in my life, I would relive that I ignored my friend\'s suggestion. He is a member of Samsung company. He tried to recommend me at Samsung, but I denied it. At that time, I was a employee previous company. After refusal, I should quit the company. According to my friend, there was a high probability of joining the company.
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]ny.
Thank you for diligently answering our essay question.
I think you have certain reasons as to why you declined your friend\'s offer to work at Samsung.
Thank you for diligently answering our essay question.
I think you have certain reasons as to why you declined your friend\'s offer to work at Samsung.
I would like to know about that in class. ^_^
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great night.
See you!
~Teacher Charry
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great night.
See you!
~Teacher Charry
>> If I could relive one moment in my life, I would relive that time when I ignored my friend\'s suggestion.
He is a member of Samsung company.
>> He is an employee at Samsung company.
He tried to recommend me at Samsung, but I denied it.
>> He tried to recommend me at Samsung, but I refused it.
At that time, I was a employee previous company.
>> At that time, I was an employee at my previous company.
After refusal, I should quit the company.
>> After my refusal, I should quit from my company.
According to my friend, there was a high probability of joining the company.
>> According to my friend, there was a high probability of me getting hired in that company.
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