If you could relive one moment in your life, what would it be? Why?
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If you could relive one moment in your life, what would it be? Why?
In conclusion, I don’t want to go back to the past. Because not only is it impossible, but also I am satisfied with the present. If I go back to the past, I have to go military once again and prepare to go to the University.. I don’t want to do this again. Also my parent are very healty. So I am always thank to my familys health state. Thus, I will continuously live in the present.
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Hi, Harry! ^_^
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This is your second homework today. You\'re so diligent! Keep it up!
Your sentences are getting better and I\'m happy. ^^
I agree that going back to the past is impossible but if I could go back in time, I would choose to go back in the year 2015 so I could see my dad again.
I envy you because your parents and everyone in your family are healthy. Please keep it that way.
Always value good health over other things. :)
I\'m glad that you\'re thankful for everything that you have right now. That is a very good attitude. ^^
I hope you\'re having an awesome night. ^^
See you again tomorrow.
~Teacher Charry :)
I envy you because your parents and everyone in your family are healthy. Please keep it that way.
Always value good health over other things. :)
I\'m glad that you\'re thankful for everything that you have right now. That is a very good attitude. ^^
I hope you\'re having an awesome night. ^^
See you again tomorrow.
~Teacher Charry :)
>> CORRECT!
Because not only is it impossible, but also I am satisfied with the present.
>> Because not only is it impossible, but I am also satisfied with the present.
If I go back to the past, I have to go military once again and prepare to go to the University..
>> If I go back to the past, I have to go to the military once again and prepare to go to the university.
I don’t want to do this again.
>> CORRECT!
Also my parent are very healty.
>> Also, my parent are very healthy.
OR >> My parents are also very healthy.
So I am always thank to my familys health state.
>> So I am always thankful for my family\'s good health status.
Thus, I will continuously live in the present.
>> CORRECT!
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