If you could relive the last 10 years of your life, what would you do differently?
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If I could relive, I would study deeply about my major after university.
>> If I could relive the last ten years of my life, I would study hard after university.
>> OR: I would study hard something that is related to my major after university.
I would go to graduate school to take master degree in Korea.
>> I would go to a graduate school to take Master\'s degree in Korea.
>> OR: I would take masterals in Korea.
And I would study english for studying abroad during master degree course.
>> Did you mean: And I would study English abroad during my master\'s degree course.
>> OR: And I would study English for the future while I am taking my master\'s degre.
After that I would go to U.S.A for doctor`s degree about New Material Engineering.
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>> OR: After that, I would go to the U.S. for PhD about New Material Engineering.
If I would do like this, I could get a job that research about New Material Engineering in a company that I want to work.
>> Correct
>> OR: If I would do like this, I could get a job that researches about New Material Engineering in a company that I want to work for.
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