If you could remove one subject from Korean schools\' curriculum, what would it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could remove one subject from Korean schools\' curriculum, I would like to remove \'Technics&Housekeeping\'.
It is the most unnecessary subject, because it only gives us commonsense what we can easily get in our daily life.
We can do another things efficiently if we get rid of it.
강사 첨삭
Good evening!
(^_^)
Sue, thank you for finding time to answer your homework.
I already made some modification. If you have questions, I will answer them on Monday.
See you then. Have a good weekend!
__Teacher Mayleen :)
If I could remove one subject from Korean schools\' curriculum, I would like to remove \'Technics&Housekeeping\'.
>>> If I could remove one subject from Korean schools\' curriculum, it would be \'Technics & Housekeeping\'.
It is the most unnecessary subject, because it only gives us commonsense what we can easily get in our daily life.
It is the most unnecessary subject, because it only gives us commonsense what we can easily get in our daily life.
>>> It is the most unnecessary subject because it only teaches us commonsense that we can easily learn in our daily life.
We can do another things efficiently if we get rid of it.
We can do another things efficiently if we get rid of it.
>>> We can do other things efficiently if we get rid of it.
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