If you could rid the world of one thing, what would it be and why?

2014-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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If you could rid the world of one thing, what would it be and why? I want to rid one thing that makes me angry. It's Incheon education policy. I heard that only incheon do the compulsive study 6~9 p.m. I want to abolish this policy. It doesn't give us any benefit. Also it decreased our students mood and confident. So I want to rid it.

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Hello there! Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I am glad because you shared some information about the system so I was able to understand your point. Anyway, let\'s just hope that someone would do something about that. But for now, look at the brighter side of it. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ If you could rid the world of one thing, what would it be and why?I want to rid one thing that makes me angry. >> I want to get rid of one thing that makes me angry. It\'s Incheon education policy. >> It\'s Incheon\'s educational policy. I heard that only incheon do the compulsive study 6~9 p.m. >> I heard that only Incheon  implements the compulsary study time from 6:00 to 9:00 p.m. I want to abolish this policy. >> Correct! It doesn\'t give us any benefit. >> Correct! Also it decreased our students mood and confident. >> It also decreases the students confidence. OR>> It also affects the students mood and confidence negatively. So I want to rid it. >> So I want to get rid of it.

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