If you could rid the world of one thing, what would it be and why?
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If you could rid the world of one thing, what would it be and why?
I want to rid one thing that makes me angry. It's Incheon education policy. I heard that only incheon do the compulsive study 6~9 p.m. I want to abolish this policy. It doesn't give us any benefit. Also it decreased our students mood and confident. So I want to rid it.
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Hello there!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
I am glad because you shared some information about the system so I was able to understand your point.
Anyway, let\'s just hope that someone would do something about that.
But for now, look at the brighter side of it.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
If you could rid the world of one thing, what would it be and why?I want to rid one thing that makes me angry.
>> I want to get rid of one thing that makes me angry.
It\'s Incheon education policy.
>> It\'s Incheon\'s educational policy.
I heard that only incheon do the compulsive study 6~9 p.m.
>> I heard that only Incheon implements the compulsary study time from 6:00 to 9:00 p.m.
I want to abolish this policy.
>> Correct!
It doesn\'t give us any benefit.
>> Correct!
Also it decreased our students mood and confident.
>> It also decreases the students confidence.
OR>> It also affects the students mood and confidence negatively.
So I want to rid it.
>> So I want to get rid of it.
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