If you could start a new collection today without worrying about money, what would it be?

2024-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jewel

학생이 쓴 원문

I like bowls and dishes. when I took a trip I like to look around the kitchenware alone. Espacially, I love tiny and preety plates but it\'s difficult what I bring it. Also it\'s not cheap .

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ju Mi! It guess you really love collecting souvenir plates and bowls. Thank you for sharing your insights. Have a great evening. 
~T. Jewel
I like bowls and dishes.
>>CORRECT
when I took a trip I like to look around the kitchenware alone.
>>When I take a trip, I like to look around kitchenware stores by myself.
Espacially, I love tiny and preety plates but it\'s difficult what I bring it.
>>I especially love tiny and pretty plates, but it\'s difficult to bring them home.
Also it\'s not cheap .
>>Also, they are not cheap.

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