If you could start your career over again, what direction would you take?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to do a job in which I can feel a sense of accomplishment and reward while communicating with people in other countries related to international development cooperation. In particular, large organizations such as international organizations would be better, but non-profit organizations and NGO organizations are also good.
I would like to work as an assistant to help other countries representing Korea while communicating in English.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for submitting a well-written composition again today. What a good way to start this week! ^^ See you later in class.
~~Teacher Kate
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2. In particular, large organizations such as international organizations would be better, but non-profit organizations and NGO organizations are also good.
>>In particular, large organizations such as international organizations would be better, but non-profit organizations and NGOs are also good. (NOTE: This is just a minor correction. I just removed the word \"organizations\" because the \"O\" already stands for organization.)
3. I would like to work as an assistant to help other countries representing Korea while communicating in English.
>>CORRECT!
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