If you could stop a bad habit that you have, what would you stop?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can stop a bad habit that I have, I will stop my sleeping habit.
nowadays I sleep late at night, and wake up so late.
This bad habit makes me feel bad because if I wake up late, I can\'t keep my bio rhythm well.
Also, It feels like the night comes so fast that makes me sleep late again everyday.
I don\'t know the reason why, but when I wake up late, I feel more sleepy and lazy. after all, I take a nap.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Oh, I feel you. I do the same thing as well. It is actually unhealthy to sleep late and wake up late at the same time. I think we should better work this kind of habit. Good luck to us!
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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If I can stop a bad habit that I have, I will stop my sleeping habit.
>> Correct!
nowadays I sleep late at night, and wake up so late.
nowadays I sleep late at night, and wake up so late.
>> Nowadays, I sleep late at night, and wake up so late. Or Nowadays, I sleep late at night and I wake up so late as well.
This bad habit makes me feel bad because if I wake up late, I can\'t keep my bio rhythm well.
This bad habit makes me feel bad because if I wake up late, I can\'t keep my bio rhythm well.
>> Correct!
Also, It feels like the night comes so fast that makes me sleep late again everyday.
Also, It feels like the night comes so fast that makes me sleep late again everyday.
>> Correct!
I don\'t know the reason why, but when I wake up late, I feel more sleepy and lazy. after all, I take a nap.
I don\'t know the reason why, but when I wake up late, I feel more sleepy and lazy. after all, I take a nap.
>> I don\'t know the reason why, but when I wake up late, I feel more sleepy and lazy. After all, I take a nap.
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