If you could stop one invention from being invented, what would it be? Why?

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If it is possible, I want to stop developing mobile games.

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The reason why I choose mobile games is that It affect from adults to the childrens.

>>> The reason why I chose mobile games is that they affect not only children but even adults.

For example, Young generations are always focusing on the mobiles when having a meal, crossing walk, and taking a class.

>>> For example, the young generation is always focused on their mobile even when they\'re having a meal, crossing the street or taking their class.

lt lead to increase of accidents in the road and lose socialities. 

>>> It leads to the increase of accidents on the road and lost of socialization.
In case of adults, They are spending a lot of time and money to get a items.

>>> In case of adults, they are spending a lot of time and money on mobile games.
 It bring them harm like a fatigue and stress. 

>>> It brings them harm like fatigue and stress.
 based on these reasons, I hope for stopping develop mobile games.

>>> Based on these reasons, I hope to stop the development of mobile games.