If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose
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To be honest, I don't have any interest in learning something new when it comes to studying. I have enough work to handle on a daily basis and think reading books is a effective way to learn something new.In fact it's hard to get some time to read a book so I don't read a book in a month. What a shame! Nowdays I have some moments that my mind goes blackout when I try to remember something that I learned the day before which is not difficult. I have to try harder maybe ten times than I used to do.
After writing all the story it sounds like a grumble of a person in her 80s or something.
Anyway if I had a chance to change my body I'd learn to dance.I've learned dancing before for a short time like belly dance and sports dance.At first I was fully ready to learn but as time goes by I lost my desire because my brain didn't follow my body.
I can't move my body with my thought.It was like they were totally different things that belong to different people.
강사 첨삭
We can always achieve what we want, if we exert effort~
However, I must admit it is sometimes difficult to materialize what we have planned.
There are lots of factors to consider, and you made me smile when you said that you look like grumbling, ha! ha!
Anyways, see you later, Miss. [Name]^^
To be honest, I don\'t have any interest in learning something new when it comes to studying.
>>CORRECT! I have enough work to handle on a daily basis and think reading books is a effective way to learn something new.
>> I have enough work to handle on a daily basis and I think reading books is a effective way to learn something new.In fact it\'s hard to get some time to read a book so I don\'t read a book in a month.
>>CORRECT! What a shame!
>>CORRECT!
Nowdays I have some moments that my mind goes blackout when I try to remember something that I learned the day before which is not difficult.
>>Nowadays there are some moments that my mind goes blackout when I try to remember something easy that I learned the day before. I have to try harder maybe ten times than I used to do.
>>Maybe, I have to try ten times harder than I used to do.After writing all the story it sounds like a grumble of a person in her 80s or something.
>>CORRECT!Anyway if I had a chance to change my body I\'d learn to dance.
>>Anyway if I had a chance to change my body capability or endurance, I\'d learn to dance.I\'ve learned dancing before for a short time like belly dance and sports dance.
>>CORRECT!
At first I was fully ready to learn but as time goes by I lost my desire because my brain didn\'t follow my body.
>>At first I was fully ready to learn but as time went by I lost my desire because my brain didn\'t follow my body.I can\'t move my body with my thought.
>>CORRECT!
It was like they were totally different things that belong to different people.
>>CORRECT!
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