If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose
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Good afternoon, Sir [이름]!
Wow! You accomplished a lot of things. ^^
Thanks for sharing about your feelings and insights about the topic.
Oh my god! I am not good at Math.
I think I can\'t run my own business because I\'m not good at marketing and finance. ^.^ Hihihi.
Anyway, I hope that you will continue exploring things. See you in class.
Teacher Nina
I majored in Electrical and Electronics Engineering.
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As I studied engineering, I wanted to broaden my academic experience to other areas such as art and literature.
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There is a perception toward engineers like they are stubborn, one-way minded, lack social skills, not knowledgeable about art or music.
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>> OR: There is a perception toward Engineers such as they are stubborn, one-way minded, lack social skills, not knowledgeable about art or music.
I wanted myself to be not categorized as such.
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So, I have actually taken art class, read many books, and listened to music in the music hall that has been operated by a music club in college.
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Although all my efforts have not brought in any tangible outcomes, I think that it was at least worth endeavoring.
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Now when I recall my school years and based on my work experience, I somewhat regret that I should have studied finance and marketing.
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These two subjects are most commonly required skills at work.
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Almost all of the private corporations sell goods or service and pursue a profit.
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In order to sell and make a profit, the two most important things we should know are marketing and finance.
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>> OR: In order to sell and make a profit, the two most important things are we should know something about marketing and finance.
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