If you could swap one part of your daily routine with a fun activity, what would you choose and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I will swap one of my dalily routine to swim. Recently I wanted to swim, this early I stopped to learn swiming
and try again.I think I feel freedom in the water likes a mermaid.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! You made me smile when I read that you wanted to swim freely like a mermaid. ^^ I hope you can swim again soon! Thank you for doing your homework. Have a great day!
~T. Jewel
I will swap one of my dalily routine to swim.
>>I will swap one of my daily routines for swimming.
Recently I wanted to swim,
>>Recently, I’ve been wanting to swim.
this early I stopped to learn swiming and try again.
>>I stopped learning to swim for a while, but now I want to give it another try.
I think I feel freedom in the water likes a mermaid.
>>I feel a sense of freedom in the water, like a mermaid.
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