If you could switch careers with someone famous for a day, who would it be and what would you do?

2024-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jewel

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If you could switch careers with someone famous for a day, who would it be and what would you do? If I could switch careers with someone famous for a day, I would be a handsome actor who likes Cha eun-woo. Because I wonder how they usually feel living with their face and famous. I am sometimes suprised at their acting and TV advertisement. I wonder this aspect that they try to excercise for the act. I can always see and check the result, not process. So I want to compare with common people who like me. Hi, Jewel. How was your day? It was a busy day. because I not manage some people as you know, but my son went to English academy without the bag and books. I had to pick the bag and brought it to my son\'s academy. I told my company that I had to go to bank. I was busy because I was a lier. It\'s 11 pm over. I\'m going to get bed. Have a nice day.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Stella! What a busy day you had yesterday! You must be very tired. Yesterday was good for me—nothing special, just a regular workday, like I always do. Thank you for asking, though. Have a great day and make sure to rest, too!
~T. Jewel
If I could switch careers with someone famous for a day, I would be a handsome actor who likes Cha eun-woo.
>>If I could switch careers with someone famous for a day, I would be a handsome actor like Cha Eun-woo.
Because I wonder how they usually feel living with their face and famous.
>>Because I wonder how they usually feel living with their fame and appearance.
I am sometimes suprised at their acting and TV advertisement.
>>I am sometimes surprised by their acting and TV advertisements.
I wonder this aspect that they try to excercise for the act.
>>I wonder about this aspect: that they try to exercise for their acting.
I can always see and check the result, not process.
>>I can always see and check the result, not the process.
So I want to compare with common people who like me.
>>So, I want to compare myself with ordinary people like me.

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