If you could take a vacation anywhere in the world for any length of time, where would you go?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can go anywhere in the world for a vacation, I would like to go to Switzerland.
I saw many photos of Switzerland on the internet like cozy wooden houses in the middle of the snowy mountain. and Those were so beautiful that I made up my mind to go there sometime.
Also I want to try some traditional foods like a foudue with white wine, a raclette which is a photato with cheese, and a rosti, known as a national foods in Switzerland. I heard that Korean people say that they can enjoy foods in Switzerland because it suits Korean tastes. I really want to try that foods.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Wow! That is my dream country! It is indeed a wonderful place to visit. It really looks peaceful in that place. I hope you can go there after this pandemic.
Thank you for sharing!
~T. Roanne ^_^
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If I can go anywhere in the world for a vacation, I would like to go to Switzerland.
>> Correct!
I saw many photos of Switzerland on the internet like cozy wooden houses in the middle of the snowy mountain.
I saw many photos of Switzerland on the internet like cozy wooden houses in the middle of the snowy mountain.
>> I saw many photos of Switzerland on the internet, like cozy wooden houses in the middle of the snowy mountain.
and Those were so beautiful that I made up my mind to go there sometime.
>>Those were so beautiful that I made up my mind to go there sometime.
Also I want to try some traditional foods like a foudue with white wine, a raclette which is a photato with cheese, and a rosti, known as a national foods in Switzerland.
Also I want to try some traditional foods like a foudue with white wine, a raclette which is a photato with cheese, and a rosti, known as a national foods in Switzerland.
>> Also, I want to try some traditional foods like a fondue with white wine, a result which is a potato with cheese, and a Rosti, known as a national food in Switzerland.
I heard that Korean people say that they can enjoy foods in Switzerland because it suits Korean tastes.
>> Correct!
I really want to try that foods.
>>I really want to try those foods.
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