If you could trade lives with someone, who would it be?

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One of my dream when I grew up enough is living normal life.

>> One of my dreams growing up is living a normal life.

I didn\'t want to be famous because celebrities looked very busy, therefore they didn\'t have free time.

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I have seen their life through documentary TV that they woke up at the early dawn and came back home late night.

>> I have seen their life through documentary TV, wherein they woke up early at dawn and came back home late at night.

I dreamed to be a doctor because they have higher salary than my job, medical technologist and patients respect them more than me.

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I would like to get fame and money too.

>> CORRECT

That\'s why I would like to trade my lives with doctor when I was twenties.

>> That\'s why I would like to trade my life with a doctor when I was in my twenties.

However, I considered time with family as a first value of my life.

>> However, I considered the time with family as my priority in life.

People were born in 1990s also think that having a free time is the most considerable factor when they choose their job.

>> People who were born in the 1990s also think that having free time is the most considerable factor when they choose their job.

For the reason I stated above, I don\'t want to trade with my lives because I am quite satisfied with my job and lives.

>> For the reason I stated above, I don\'t want to trade my life with anyone because I am quite satisfied with my job and living status.

I have lovely family to spend my free time.

>> I have a lovely family to spend my free time with.