If you could travel back in time, where would you go?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can do it, I want to travel back at middle school student. Even though I will experience military service again. I almost plated computer game. It was a waste of time. I want to make memories with my family and friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
Yes, regrets will always be there but keep in mind that our experiences are the ones that make the person we are today. :)
If I can do it, I want to travel back at middle school student.
>> If I can do it, I want to travel back to the time when I was a middle school student even though I will experience military service again.
Even though I will experience military service again.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
I almost plated computer game.
>> I almost plated a computer game.
It was a waste of time.
>> CORRECT
I want to make memories with my family and friends.
>> CORRECT
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