If you could travel back in time, where would you go?

2022-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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If you could travel back in time, where would you go? If I can travel back in time, I want to go to England. I think that England is more classical than other European cities. Also,I want to go to my favriote Sherlock Homles house and British Museum. I think there is not much time left to go aborad.

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If I can travel back in time, I want to go to England.

>> If I can travel back in time, I want to go back to England.

I think that England is more classical than other European cities.

>> CORRECT

Also,I want to go to my favriote Sherlock Homles house and British Museum.

>> Also, I want to go back to my favorite which is Sherlock Holmes\'s house and the British Museum.

I think there is not much time left to go aborad.

>> TI think there is not much time left to go to abroad.

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