If you could travel back in time, where would you go?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, a school that I want to go back. You know? I didn\'t study hard until third grade in high school because I didn\'t think it\'s important to study. But as getting older, I realized it\'s very important. So if I have chance to travel back in time, I would do it. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi Eric! Well done on working diligently on your homework. You provided good points in your essay. Great job!
[이름]cerely,
^^ T. Ara
>>> Of course, there\'s a school I\'d like to return to.
You know?
>>> No correction needed.
I didn\'t study hard until third grade in high school because I didn\'t think it\'s important to study.
>>> I didn\'t study hard until the third grade of high school because I didn\'t think studying was important.
But as getting older, I realized it\'s very important.
>>> But as I got older, I realized it\'s very important.
So if I have chance to travel back in time, I would do it. :)
>>> So, if I had the chance to travel back in time, I would do it. :)
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