If you could turn back time, would you like to change your major? Why or Why not?

2022-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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Yes and No. I have a half and half opinions. Even though I love my job so far, it\'s not easy to work process for me in this field. Because when I have to relate to God deeply, I can work healthy spiritually. I\'m a person who has so many weaknesses that is weak physically and mentally. Sometimes, I ask God about my calling with doubt. Before I went to Theology University, I just loved God so much. That\'s the reason to decide to go to school. But while I was in ministry, I can realize how to difficult. Sometimes I didn\'t like to meet church members. I just wanted to pray and worship God. Overtime over when I pray, I could realize God wanted me to cry to people. God is finding people who can cry with pray for God. I want to be a God person who cries for him. I always think that I need God\'s help. I believe that when I ask and search and knock with faith in God, I can do all things through him. Even though this process is not easy for me, I believe God helps me. Thanks, Faith!

강사 첨삭

Hi, Jane! I will continue praying for your more intimate relationship with God. I am sorry if I can\'t study with you today, I am still trying to resolve some internet issues on my end. See you tomorrow!-Faith-
Yes and No. 
>> CORRECT
OR My answer is both.
I have a half and half opinions. 
>> I have half and half opinions.
OR I have neutral opinions on it.
Even though I love my job so far, it\'s not easy to work process for me in this field. 
>> Even though I love my job so far, the work process in this field is not easy for me.
Because when I have to relate to God deeply, I can work healthy spiritually. 
>> The reason for that is when I relate myself to God deeply, I can work healthy spiritually. 
I\'m a person who has so many weaknesses that is weak physically and mentally. 
>> I\'m a person who has so many weaknesses both physically and mentally. 
Sometimes, I ask God about my calling with doubt. 
>> CORRECT
Before I went to Theology University, I just loved God so much. 
>> CORRECT
That\'s the reason to decide to go to school. 
>> That\'s the reason why I decided to go to school. 
But while I was in ministry, I can realize how to difficult. 
>> But while I was in ministry, I realized how difficult it was. 
Sometimes I didn\'t like to meet church members. 
>> CORRECT
I just wanted to pray and worship God. 
>> CORRECT
Overtime over when I pray, I could realize God wanted me to cry to people. 
>> When I pray overtime, I would realize God wanted me to cry for other people. 
God is finding people who can cry with pray for God. 
>> God is finding people who can cry when praying to Him.
I want to be a God person who cries for him. 
>> I want to be a person who cries to Him. 
I always think that I need God\'s help. 
>> CORRECT
I believe that when I ask and search and knock with faith in God, I can do all things through him. 
>> I believe that when I ask, search and knock with faith in God, I can do all things through Him. 
Even though this process is not easy for me, I believe God helps me. 
>> CORRECT
Thanks, Faith!
>> CORRECT

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