If you could visit any country in the world, where would you go and why.(in 4 sentences)

2018-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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If you could visit any country in the world, where would you go and why.(in 4 sentences) I got a certificate of scuba diving last year, but I haven’t enjoyed it in the sea until now. My swimming buddies suggested me to go scuba diving to [이름]pine, but I couldn’t join them. [이름]pine is famous for wonderful diving points, but I have never been there. I’d like to visit [이름]pine to enjoy scuba diving and meet Teacher Ally!

강사 첨삭

Wow!

I wish I could scuba dive too. ^^

Yes, the [이름]pine seas are quite breathtaking.

I hope someday you get to scuba dive here in the [이름]pines so you can see the wonders of the ocean. ^^


~~t. Ally




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I got a certificate of scuba diving last year, but I haven’t enjoyed it in the sea until now.

>> I got a certificate for scuba diving last year, but I still  haven\'t enjoyed it in the sea to this day.


 My swimming buddies suggested me to go scuba diving to [이름]pine, but I couldn’t join them.

>> My swimming buddies suggested to me to go scuba diving in the [이름]pines with them, but I wasn\'t able to come.


 [이름]pine is famous for wonderful diving points, but I have never been there.

>> The [이름]pines is famous for wonderful diving points, but I have never been there.


 I’d like to visit [이름]pine to enjoy scuba diving and meet Teacher Ally!

>> I\'d like to visit the [이름]pines to enjoy scuba diving and meet teacher Ally!

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