If you could write a book about yourself, what would it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
i want to write about my communicate skill.
I\'m not proud of it, but i can get close to stranger relatively easy.
it is really useful power.
i can get trust from others, it makes me more energetic
i feel happy when i get trust or compliment.
it means i gave help to others and then it is a helpful action.
it\'s little complicated.
i mean, to get close easily is very helpful skill for me for others.
so i can get good feeling, this good feeling sometimes can be a chance to improve my life.
overall to get along with each other is best reward for me and also come back someday to me
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thanks for the nice response. That would be a good and an interesting read if you write something about your communication methods and how to gain people\'s trust because that is not easy:)
-Rachel
i want to write about my communicate skill.
I want to write about my communication skills.
I\'m not proud of it, but i can get close to stranger relatively easy.
>> correct
it is really a useful power.
>> correct
>> It is a really beneficial ability.
i can get trust from others, it makes me more energetic
i can get trust from others, it makes me more energetic
>> If I can get trust from others, it makes me more energetic.
>> If I can gain people\'s trust, I am more energetic.
i feel happy when i get trust or compliment.
i feel happy when i get trust or compliment.
>> correct
>> It makes me satisfied when I gain people\'s trusts and they give me compliments.
it means i gave help to others and then it is a helpful action.
it means i gave help to others and then it is a helpful action.
>> It means that I am able to offer help to others and it is beneficial for them.
it\'s little complicated.
it\'s little complicated.
>> correct
i mean, to get close easily is very helpful skill for me for others.
i mean, to get close easily is very helpful skill for me for others.
>> To get close easily is very helpful for me so I can help others betters.
so i can get good feeling, this good feeling sometimes can be a chance to improve my life.
so i can get good feeling, this good feeling sometimes can be a chance to improve my life.
>> correct
overall to get along with each other is best reward for me and also come back someday to me
overall to get along with each other is best reward for me and also come back someday to me
>> Overall, to get along well with others is rewarding for me and it will come back to me some day.
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