If you could write a book, what would it be about? Give it a title.(in not more than 5 sentences)

2018-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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If you could write a book, what would it be about? Give it a title.(in not more than 5 sentences) Title : We should be most honest to ourselves. Each individual is a weak creature, but we should make a lot of decisions in every moment. Although our lives are affected by our own decisions, most of us would be afraid of confronting with the very moment of decision and even try to avoid it. Sometimes, we ask other people including parents, spouse, relatives, friends, teachers, professionals and even strangers on the internet to help us make good decisions. Because we have to accept the result of our decisions, we should be most honest to our selves, in other words, we should listen to ourselves. ----------------------------------------------- Ally! I printed out ‘Free Talking One’.

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There is so much truth in this composition.

I agree with your statements. ^^

Nobody knows us better than ourselves, therefore at the end of the day, we are the best help we could actually ask for.

If you actually published this book, I would be really interested in reading it.




~~t. Ally




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P.S. Let\'s use Free Talking One in our next class, [이름]. :)



Title : We should be most honest to ourselves.

>> CORRECT!


 Each individual is a weak creature, but we should make a lot of decisions in every moment.

>> Each individual is a weak creature, but we are given the chance to make a lot of decisions in every moment that could ultimately change our destinies.


 Although our lives are affected by our own decisions, most of us would be afraid of confronting with the very moment of decision and even try to avoid it.

>> Although our lives are affected by our own decisions, most of us would be afraid of confronting it the very moment we make the decision and even try avoiding it.


 Sometimes, we ask other people including parents, spouse, relatives, friends, teachers, professionals and even strangers on the internet to help us make good decisions.

>> CORRECT!


 Because we have to accept the result of our decisions, we should be most honest to our selves, in other words, we should listen to ourselves.

>> CORRECT!



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