If you created a charity what cause would you focus on?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can do it, I want to fully focus on an orphanage, because I\'m a big fan of children. Also I received the love a lot from my parents, grandparents, neighborhood and etc. So I want to express an appreciation to kids as I received.
강사 첨삭
Lovely day to you, Elic! Thursday is here, it’s time to reduce the workload and start preparing for the long weekend. :)
If I can do it, I want to fully focus on an orphanage, because I\'m a big fan of children.
>> If I have the chance to create a charity, I will fully focus on having an orphanage because I love children.
Also I received the love a lot from my parents, grandparents, neighborhood and etc. So I want to express an appreciation to kids as I received.
>> When I was still a kid, I receive a lot of love and care from my parents, grandparents, neighborhoods, and etc. So, I want to give back the appreciation to the kids.
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