If you find $100, is it yours to keep? Why or why not?

2018-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

학생이 쓴 원문

Im not going to keep because that is not mine that meens im not going to keep miss and you???

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Elin!

Thank you for doing your homework!

I really appreciate you doing it.

However, it is much better if you make your answer a bit longer ^^

I know you can construct good sentences.

Practice your writing skills here ^^

You can do it! ^^

Well, in my case, I am going to ask the people around first if they lost their money and if not, I am going to keep it. Kkkkk~ ^^

Now, please check the revisions I have made below.


Im not going to keep because that is not mine that meens im not going to keep miss and you???

>> I am not going to keep the money because it is not mine to keep. How about you?

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