If you found a large amount of money, what would you do?
학생이 쓴 원문
Today I'm going to think about how I'll behave if I find a lot of money on the road. Then I hope you all pay attention.
First, I think I'm going to be in conflict with my mind. Whether to choose good or evil. I think evil will outrun good. That's because every human being has greed. But I will try to choose good that is not evil. The person who loses the money may be a member of a family. Suppose your father lost his wallet while walking. The wallet contained all the money, not to mention the family's bankbook. But how would you feel if a few days later no one saw it? It is the same situation. So, if i found a large amount of money I will give the police officer that money.
Then, You were passing by then. But while walking down the street, I found a lot of money. What will you do then?
강사 첨삭
Today I\'m going to think about how I\'ll behave if I find a lot of money on the road. Then I hope you all pay attention.
First, I think I\'m going to be in conflict with my mind. Whether to choose good or evil. I think evil will outrun good. That\'s because every human being has greed.
Then, You were passing by then. But while walking down the street, I found a lot of money. What will you do then?
>>Then, if you were passing by then. But while walking down the street, I found a lot of money. What will you do then? (small letter for \"you\")
>>CORRECT
First, I think I\'m going to be in conflict with my mind. Whether to choose good or evil. I think evil will outrun good. That\'s because every human being has greed.
>>CORRECT
But I will try to choose good that is not evil. The person who loses the money may be a member of a family. Suppose your father lost his wallet while walking.
>>CORRECT
The wallet contained all the money, not to mention the family\'s bankbook. But how would you feel if a few days later no one saw it? It is the same situation. So, if i found a large amount of money I will give the police officer that money.
>>The wallet contained all the money, not to mention the family\'s bankbook. But how would you feel if a few days later no one saw it? It is the same situation. So, if I found a large amount of money I will give the police officer that money. (capital letter for \"I\")
Then, You were passing by then. But while walking down the street, I found a lot of money. What will you do then?
>>Then, if you were passing by then. But while walking down the street, I found a lot of money. What will you do then? (small letter for \"you\")
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