If you go back to the time that you\'re still single, would you marry someone that you don\'t love?

2019-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

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The dishes and bowls are not plastic but glass or ceramic ware. The spoons, forks and chopsticks are not plastics. They serve real wine and champagne. The price of the first class and the business is as from 4 times to 20 times as that of the economy seat. And the gap of them is 1000 dollars. ^^ --the end -- ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; If you go back to the time that you\'re still single, would you marry someone that you don\'t love? Why or why not? No, I wouldn\'t. When it come to choosing my partner of my whole life, I would marry someone who I can respect more and deserves my caring , love , interest and considereation . Love is not the only means of marriage life.  My Mr. [Name] shoud have similiar personality and values of my life to mine.

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Hi [이름]!

Thank you for your effort in making your homework. Enjoy the rest of your afternoon! ^^


The dishes and bowls are not plastic but glass or ceramic ware.

>>>The dishes and bowls are not plastic, but glass or ceramic wares.

The price of the first class and the business is as from 4 times to 20 times as that of the economy seat.

>>>The price of the first class and the business class is 4 times to 20 times as that of the economy class.

 And the gap of them is 1000 dollars.

>>> And the price gap is 1000 dollars.

When it come to choosing my partner of my whole life, I would marry someone who I can respect more and deserves my caring , love , interest and considereation .

>>>When it comes to choosing my partner for a lifetime, I would marry someone who I can respect more and deserves my caring , love , interests and consideration.

My Mr. [Name] shoud have similiar personality and values of my life to mine.

>>>My Mr. [Name] should have similar personality and values as to mine.






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