If you had 24 hours of your own, without any responsibilities, how would you spend that time?

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I have rarely taken a day off solely for myself.

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If I had had it, it was because I had to take care of my personal or family business.

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For the last 20 years, I had a day off a few times without any special reasons, but to relax.

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Remembering what I did on those days, I mostly spent time playing tennis or just hanging around at home with watching TV.

>> Remembering what I did on those days, I mostly spent time playing tennis or just hanging around at home while watching TV.

>> OR: Remembering what I did on those days, I mostly spent time playing tennis or just hanging around at home,watching TV.

Now if I had 24 hours of my own without any responsibilities, I might take my parents to the place where we lived when we moved to Seoul about 30 years ago.

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When our family first moved to Seoul, we rented a small room of the house that had six rooms.

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All the six rooms were for rent and six families lived together including us.

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>> OR: We lived there with six families, all of the rooms were for rent.

The six families had to share the well and the toilet.

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There was no bathroom or shower room.

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At that time, there were four people in my family and the room even was not enough for us to just lie on our backs.

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It was difficult times.

>> It was a difficult time.

I would like my parents to visit there again to give them a chance to reflect on it.

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