If you had $3,000 to improve your home, what would you spend it on?
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There are a few things that I would like to improve at my home.
>> There are few things that I would like to improve in my house.
Firstly, floor in my living room is made of wood panels that are susceptible to external damages when something drops.
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>> OR: Firstly, the floor in my living room is made of wood panels that are susceptible to external damages when something drops.
There are many dents and small craters, so I would like to replace them with new panels.
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Secondly, I need to buy a table for TV in the living room.
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>> OR: Secondly, I need to buy a table for the TV in the living room.
Lastly I need some posters or paintings that are to be put on walls.
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I currently don’t any decorations at my home, so it looks like a just studio, not home.
>> Currently, I don\'t have any decorations at home, so it looks like just a studio not a home.
>> OR: Currently, I don\'t have any decorations in my house, so it looks like just a studio not a home.
A living room typically creates a lasting impression for all who enter.
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It serves as a comfortable family gathering place for watching TV, doing homework, or sipping tea.
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It tells my family and guests if I am formal and elegant or fun-loving and laid-back.
>> Did you mean: It tells my family and guests that I am formal and elegant or fun-loving and laid-back.
It sets the mood for the home and should be a reflection of the owner’s personal taste.
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However, the most important thing in decorating your home is creating environments that can make your family feel comfortable, not to show others.
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