If you had 3 wishes, what would it be?

2021-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Please make me smart. 2. Please make me happy. 3. Please make me strong.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

A wish is connected to a desire or a longing, which is connected to the heart and the emotion of yearning. Most people wish and at some point, it makes as happy and hopeful for something. :)

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1. Please make me smart.

>> I wish to be smart, happy and strong.

2. Please make me happy.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

3. Please make me strong.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

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