If you had 3 wishes, what would it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have 3 wish, and it can come true, I will wish that I can make 10 more wish.
Then I can wish a lot of things and if I have to wish the last wish, I will wish that I can make 10 more wish again.
And I will repeat this thing so I will make a lot of wish.
강사 첨삭
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If I have 3 wish, and it can come true, I will wish that I can make 10 more wish.
>> If I have 3 wish, and it can come true, I will wish that I can have 10 more wishes.
Then I can wish a lot of things and if I have to wish the last wish, I will wish that I can make 10 more wish again.
>> When that happens, I can wish for more things. For my last wish, I would wish for more wishes again.
And I will repeat this thing so I will make a lot of wish.
>> I will repeat this so I would have unlimited wishes.
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