If you had 3 wishes, what would it be and why?
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Fisrt, I want to have 5 billion that unrelated to crime. Because money is one of the best things in our life. Senond, I want to have clear relationships, because I don’t want to get headache from relationships. Lastly, I want to enter a good university. Because in Korea, an academic clique is so important.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Those are good and smart wishes. I hope they would come true :)
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Fisrt, I want to have 5 billion that unrelated to crime. Because money is one of the best things in our life.
>> First, I want to have 5 billion won that didn\'t come from crime because money is one of the best things in life.
Senond, I want to have clear relationships, because I don’t want to get headache from relationships.
>> Second, I want to have relationships that have clear motives because I don\'t want to get headaches from it.
Lastly, I want to enter a good university. Because in Korea, an academic clique is so important.
>> Lastly, I want to enter a good university because in Korea, an academic clique is so important.
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