If you had a consultation with an astrologist, what would you want to know?
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A month ago, I had a chance to watch a documentary on TV, explaining how the universe and the solar system have been created. It was the serial documentary covering the big bang theory, how life was initiated, whether there is a planet where the basic form of life or intelligent extraterrestrial that is more advanced than humans exists. It is mystery and still unknown how big the universe is. Many astrologists say that there is a high possibility that other solar systems could exist because there are billions of galaxies in the visible universe and the earth could not be an only planet that has life. Actually, we don’t know how big the universe is and the planet earth is just one of hundreds of millions planets and comets. If the universe has an edge, what is beyond the edge? And if the universe had a beginning, what was going on before that? Will the earth be circulating in an orbit forever without a conflict with other satellites and until when the sun will be exploring?
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Great composition again Sir [이름]!
Yes, is it still unknown how big the universe is.
I am really wondering what other forms of life exists in the solar system.
It\'s a bit scary if we will be able to know that there are other people living in another planet.
I think in the future, people will know more a lot of things about the universe because of the advancing technology.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
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>> A month ago, I had a chance to watch a documentary on TV, explaining how the universe and the solar system was created.
It was the serial documentary covering the big bang theory, how life was initiated, whether there is a planet where the basic form of life or intelligent extraterrestrial that is more advanced than humans exists.
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It is mystery and still unknown how big the universe is.
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Many astrologists say that there is a high possibility that other solar systems could exist because there are billions of galaxies in the visible universe and the earth could not be an only planet that has life.
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>> Many astrologists say that there is a high possibility that other solar systems could exist because there are billions of galaxies in the visible universe. And the earth could not be an only planet that has life.
Actually, we don’t know how big the universe is and the planet earth is just one of hundreds of millions planets and comets.
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>> Actually, we don\'t know how big the universe is and the Earth is just one of the hundreds of millions planets and comets in the solar system.
If the universe has an edge, what is beyond the edge?
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>> If the universe has an edge. what is beyond it?
And if the universe had a beginning, what was going on before that?
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Will the earth be circulating in an orbit forever without a conflict with other satellites and until when the sun will be exploring?
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