If you had a different name would you be a different person?
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Good morning Ms. [이름]!
Thanks for today it is really quite a blue Monday.
And you forgot to tell me your new name since you chose to have a different name. ^^
Anyway, I will talk to you again tomorrow!
May you have a great day ahead!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If I had a chance to have a different name, I would like to be a differen person.
>> correct!
It is curious to live in a different way.
>> correct!
>> or; I am just curious about living a different way.
If I could choose my life, I would choose a rich life or a famous person.
>> If I could choose my life, I would choose a rich life or become a famous person.
Of course I want to have an easy and good life.
>> correct!
However,eventhough I couldn\'t choose the life, I want to accept that new life and try to live positively and happily.
>> correct!
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