If you had a different name would you be a different person?

2015-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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If I had a chance to have a different name, I would like to be a differen person. It is curious to live in a different way. If I could choose my life, I would choose a rich life or a famous person. Of course I want to have an easy and good life. However,eventhough I couldn't choose the life, I want to accept that new life and try to live positively and happily.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ms. [이름]!

Thanks for today it is really quite a blue Monday.

And you forgot to tell me your new name since you chose to have a different name. ^^

Anyway, I will talk to you again tomorrow!

May you have a great day ahead!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


If I had a chance to have a different name, I would like to be a differen person.

>>  correct!
 It is curious to live in a different way.

>>  correct!

>> or; I am just curious about living a different way.

If I could choose my life, I would choose a rich life or a famous person.

>>  If I could choose my life, I would choose a rich life or become a famous person.

Of course I want to have an easy and good life. 

>>  correct! 
 However,eventhough I couldn\'t choose the life, I want to accept that new life and try to live positively and happily.

>>  correct!

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