If you had a long holiday, what will you do with it?Do you like to stay up late on holidays?

2020-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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If I have a long hiliday, I\'d like to go to trip oversea. I like to doing exotic exprience. And also I will stay up late on holiday, if the country has a night culture;like night market or night festival.

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If I have a long hiliday, I\'d like to go to trip oversea.
>> If I have a long holiday, I\'d like to go to an overseas trip.

I like to doing exotic exprience.
>> I like to doing exotic experiences.

And also I will stay up late on holiday, if the country has a night culture;like night market or night festival.
>> And also, I will stay up late on holiday. If the country has a night culture, such as night market or night festival.

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